Tuesday, February 24, 2015

The Kite Runner (2)

Hello Linear Elevens: I would like to have a look att his concept: Causative Incident (CI), which is also called the inciting incident. What does that term suggest?
Check out the notes and writing assignment below and prepare a composition that reflects your impression of the CI and the likely conflict that will follow.

Novel Study: Paragraph 2 

Every story worthy of that name has a conflict, and conflict is the direct outgrowth of a causative incident (CI). From the story that you are reading, identify the CI and write about how that CI came about and what likely conflict it will encourage. 

Writing the paragraph: unity and coherence: 

A paragraph is unified when it stays on topic.
A paragraph is coherent when the point made is clearly made. 

To achieve unity and coherence write a paragraph that outlines the CA and indicates what likely conflict will transpire.
 
The criteria for this paragraph: 

  • Maintaining unity
  • Achieving coherence
  • writing in active sentences
  • using at least one correlative conjunction
To add style to your writing play with your words. Add a hook that you return to in the concluding sentence.

Example:

            (hook) When you look around at others you probably assume that people are all the same - and that only you are different. Well, in that regard we are all the same - we each like to think that we are the different one! In Sherman Alexie’s novel, Part Time Indian, the man character, Junior, likes to think that he is unique. This wildly original thinking, though, is what leads to the causative event in this book. Junior, a Okanagan native boy, leaves his rez school in central Washington to attend a white school in the nearby town of Reardon. Because he’s fought with his teacher at his reservation school, Junior makes the decision to attend Reardon High School, and consequently finds himself between two worlds, the world of his native heritage and his adopted white culture. Without a doubt this causative incident should lead to plenty of conflict, in the variety of both man versus man and man versus self. So, the next time that you are looking around to see that everyone else is the same, give your head a shake and realize that there are as many differences as there are people out there! (clincher)

Friday, February 13, 2015

The Kite Runner (1)






Novel Study Paragraph # 1 

While reading the novel select one quotation which “strikes” you and write it down. Include a proper reference to the quotation you select. 

Example: “But he's not my friend! I almost blurted. He's my servant." (Hosseini, 2003, p.44)


The reason for selecting a specific quotation should be because it… 
Annoys you…
Angers you…
Inspires you…
Frustrates you…
Makes you think…
Confuses you…
Reminds you…
  1. Copy verbatim the quotation and reference accordingly. State which of the above apply to the selected quotation.
  2. Tie the quotation to the story in such a way as to give a bit of background to it.
  3. In a clearly structured paragraph respond to the quotation with an explanation about why the quotation addresses one of the above concerns. (topic sentence, developing sentences and concluding sentence)
 

Example: When Amir, in Hosseini's novel, The Kite Runner, utters these immortal words, "But he's not my friend! I almost blurted. He's my servant."“(Hosseini, 2003, p.44)   I shudder to think of the depth to which his betrayal might go. Amir is immediately portrayed by his words as a coward. To save himself from the imminent beating that Assef and his two henchmen are about to lay on him, Amir is willing to distance himself from his bosum friend, Hassan. Amir has detailed the strength of the bond between himself and Hassan but he has also hinted at a betrayal, although I dont think this is the betrayal to which he has alluded. I wonder, also, whether Hassan is thinking of saving himself, or if a life of servitude has conditioned him to be brave. To Amir's credit, he does not utter the words that he thinks, and this might be what saves his relationship, becasue certainly he could easily align himself with the bullies and ensure Hassan's unfortunate fate. As suspense increases, I will read on to find out what form Amir's eventual betrayal takes and how this affects their relationship.